poetic criticism...

well,i actually did'nt plan 2 put these poems here..or for that matter anywhere public...
but then,my greed for new posts[:D] and on my friends insistence,i've decided 2 post it here...

but ,before i begin... a small warning:-IF THE FOLLOWING CONTENT OFFENDS ANYONE,I'M HAPPY THAT IT DID BECAUSE IT'S MEANT TO,seriously though , it was just written for fun and tp..
i actually wrote the first four lines in a serious mood... but,the last word in the first para changed my feelings and i changed the topic in response to my change in feelings....
i've still included in the poem though,albeit as a prologue sorta thing.

(the xx is to hide the guys identity and save his face)

ALXX.

PROLOGUE:-

Life is full of ups and downs,
with no regard for morality,
where people like me are treated like clowns,
while others appreciate brutality.....

MAIN "COURSE"

I Say this not coz i am me,
but only because i can see,
that this world is filled with people like alXX,
who likes to ask doubts,even in the loo...

i think he's got a fat injection,
to make him look like an ALXX's projection.
god only knows what else he could be,
could he be a fat idiot sitting on a tree?

by which i mean,is he an ape?
whose only job on earth is to make others gape,
with fear ,of course, they'll look at him,
waiting for the day when somebody will burst him with a pin.

i hope that day comes sooner rather than later,
as god only knows,how much more i can bear his slow chatter!!
o god,i beseech thee,reduce our earth's wieght,
plz remove alXX,by showing on as a bait!!!

never ever yours sincerely,
the god of small things.
(am i not supposed to be tall?)